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My own eyes, my demise


Unfinished –
Epiphany

I saw something from my own eyes,
While you were busy with your lives,
I saw from my eyes, my own demise
The journey, away from your lies
Mirage: I assumed was my life
You were busy, weaving a world of lies
Blind to my tears, deaf to my cries
I saw from my eyes, my own demise
The pain, the suffering, I now realize
Were courtesy your stabbed knives.
Those hopes, those dreams, all lies
Mirage: I assumed to be my life
Irony, Perhaps, death brings new life
Like a phoenix, I soon shall rise
Blind to my tears, deaf to my cries
I saw from my eyes, my own demise

To be continued…

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9 responses

  1. Alankar Misra Avatar
    Alankar Misra

    I can soooooo relate to this.

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    1. satyenpoojary Avatar
      satyenpoojary

      Ahem! Then may be add to it!

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      1. Alankar Misra Avatar
        Alankar Misra

        LOL nah! I’m no good with poetry although it would be an interesting experiment. Currently though I’m addicted to video. Loads of experimentation happening there.

      2. satyenpoojary Avatar
        satyenpoojary

        A time lapsed video of the setting sun near the expressway or the Pagoda with these words should be an interesting experiment 😉

      3. Alankar Misra Avatar
        Alankar Misra

        satyenpoojary :
        A time lapsed video of the setting sun …

        Coincidentally I’ve done a few experiments with the rising sun that worked out pretty well but I didn’t do the full thing. But yeah, pagoda/expressway sounds like a fun idea. Anyway these next few weeks are hard from the work perspective so I’ll just focus on that for a while.

  2. xpressjits Avatar
    xpressjits

    Nice lines…… Gets into a good mood and then the abrupt pause “to be continued”. Try to find the missing words and complete it. Will wait until then/ 🙂

    Reply
    1. satyenpoojary Avatar
      satyenpoojary

      Added a few more lines 😉
      Will wait for the right time to finish it

      Reply
  3. Abdul Rehman Avatar
    Abdul Rehman

    Unfinished, yet distinctive!!!
    Keep it up!

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    1. satyenpoojary Avatar
      satyenpoojary

      🙂

      Reply

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